Post by mkp2008 on Nov 27, 2006 17:45:50 GMT -5
Heh, my budding NCIS story, (posted here as well as there).
Disclaimer: I do not own anyone from NCIS. All names used for characters where made from my imagination (Chelsea, Alex, Jason, and Marc are all ORIGINAL characters, Harley is to). Any names are honest coincidences.
Note Madison is the name I am using for Gibbs late daughter (not sure if she has an offical name yet or not).
Summery: Gibbs and crew are summoned to teach at a “camp” in Orlando about US special forces. 5 completely diffrent teens, from 5 completely diffrent backgrounds, all in Gibbs care. Insanity follows as Gibbs finds the love he's been searching for...in a way he never expected. NO DEAD KATE! So be on the look out for Ziva/Kate cat fights.
“Awww lighten up Gibbs; it’ll be fun.” Gibbs glared out the window of the SUV as the car past yet another obnoxiously bright Disney World sign. Abby pouted at her boss’s dreary demeanor. The car lurched to a sudden stop causing Abby’s head to hit the back of Gibbs seat.
“Tony! What the hell!” Tony glared back at Kate.
“Well Kate; let’s see you drive in this hell maze people call “Orlando”.
“Actually Tony this is Kissimmee we’re about 5 miles from the…”
“Shut up Probie.” McGee put his hands up in surrender and went back to skimming through magazines in the pouch behind Tony’s seat.
“I don’t know if you have realized yet Tony, but McGee isn’t technically a probie anymore.”
“Ziva..”
“TONY!”
“What!”
“You just missed our turn.” Tony cussed roadways and exits while rubbing the spot Gibbs had smacked when he yelled.
“Tony if you could get over your “masculine” self…” Ziva interrupted Kate.
“Or mature whichever comes first.”
“Yeah, anyway you should have let me drive.”
“Well it doesn’t matter Kate since neither of us has ever driven here before.”
“You know Anthony; I knew the man whose father originally engineered this entire road back before it was an interstate.” Tony began smacking his head on the steering wheel.
Harley Devane sat quietly at a table marked “Gibbs”. She was typing on her laptop to her friend back home Thomas Grammar. She was the only one her so far from her “platoon”. She had yet to meet “Leroy Jethro Gibbs”. A discharged marine who supposedly had authority issues, or at least that was what Director Sheppard had said. Her brown hair fell into her blue eyes as she fidgeted in both impatience and anxiety. The door to the dining room swung open with a bang.
“Tony! Just drop it!”
“Well Kate…”
“Dinozzo! Shut up.”
“Sorry Boss.” Gibbs glared at Tony. He wasn’t very happy about being there in the first place, but Jen had just informed him not only would he be teaching a field training class, a history of the marines, and would HAVE to do a speech; but to put the cherry on this he was going to be in charge of 5 teenagers.
“Cheer up Gibbs, I’m sure these kids will be great!” Gibbs wished he could be as optimistic as Abby.
“So where are they at?”
“Well we could go find the director.” Gibbs gave Ziva her answer via death glare.
“Or we could just go to the table marked Gibbs.” She motioned over to a table in the corner with a lone girl sitting at it typing on a laptop.
“I thought I had 5 of the things.”
“They may be late boss.”
“Excellent observation Tony.” Gibbs swallowed hard. Something to him this would be the most life changing experience in his whole life. He walked over to the table and sat his coffee down.
“I thought there where supposed to be five of you.” Harley looked up at the man. This must have been him.
“They aren’t here yet sir….general…lieutenant….” Gibbs felt a small pang of warmth in his chest. A scowl relaxed into a kind smile. That was the same thing Abby had said when he first met her…well the end part was. For some reason she seemed to remind him of Abby.
“Just Gibbs. So I’m your…”
“Platoon leader is what the paper says si..Gibbs.” He smiled at the girl and took a seat.
“What’s your name?”
“I’m Harley Devane.”
“How old are you?”
“16.” That defiantly hit a mark in Gibbs heart. ‘Madison would have been 16…’ He thought to himself.
“I think the others are here now sir.” Gibbs looked around and saw four more teens headed in their direction. One girl and three guys. The girl had long dark auburn hair with strawberry highlights. One boy had jet black and board straight hair that went to his ears. The second had messy blonde hair, but at least it wasn’t long. The third had brown hair that was both poofy and long; the back was equal length with his chin. Gibbs shuddered these kids couldn’t have been more different. The girl introduced herself as Chelsea Darton, an all around athlete and apparent health nut. The first boy was Marcus “Marc” Lavery, from what Gibbs could tell he was the ‘outcast’ sort, the darker side of Goth or he might have just been ‘punk’. The second boy was Jason Emerald; he put off the ‘jock’ vibe. The third and final boy was Alex Hooper, he seemed to be the only ‘normal’ one…if Gibbs could past the hair. Actually Alex had an essence of McGee to him.
‘Oh joy.’ Gibbs thought. ‘An Angel, a devil, a sports fanatic, a computer geek, and a well whatever you could all a prep/jock. This is gonna be fun..”
Chapter 1
Disclaimer: I do not own anyone from NCIS. All names used for characters where made from my imagination (Chelsea, Alex, Jason, and Marc are all ORIGINAL characters, Harley is to). Any names are honest coincidences.
Note Madison is the name I am using for Gibbs late daughter (not sure if she has an offical name yet or not).
Summery: Gibbs and crew are summoned to teach at a “camp” in Orlando about US special forces. 5 completely diffrent teens, from 5 completely diffrent backgrounds, all in Gibbs care. Insanity follows as Gibbs finds the love he's been searching for...in a way he never expected. NO DEAD KATE! So be on the look out for Ziva/Kate cat fights.
“Awww lighten up Gibbs; it’ll be fun.” Gibbs glared out the window of the SUV as the car past yet another obnoxiously bright Disney World sign. Abby pouted at her boss’s dreary demeanor. The car lurched to a sudden stop causing Abby’s head to hit the back of Gibbs seat.
“Tony! What the hell!” Tony glared back at Kate.
“Well Kate; let’s see you drive in this hell maze people call “Orlando”.
“Actually Tony this is Kissimmee we’re about 5 miles from the…”
“Shut up Probie.” McGee put his hands up in surrender and went back to skimming through magazines in the pouch behind Tony’s seat.
“I don’t know if you have realized yet Tony, but McGee isn’t technically a probie anymore.”
“Ziva..”
“TONY!”
“What!”
“You just missed our turn.” Tony cussed roadways and exits while rubbing the spot Gibbs had smacked when he yelled.
“Tony if you could get over your “masculine” self…” Ziva interrupted Kate.
“Or mature whichever comes first.”
“Yeah, anyway you should have let me drive.”
“Well it doesn’t matter Kate since neither of us has ever driven here before.”
“You know Anthony; I knew the man whose father originally engineered this entire road back before it was an interstate.” Tony began smacking his head on the steering wheel.
Harley Devane sat quietly at a table marked “Gibbs”. She was typing on her laptop to her friend back home Thomas Grammar. She was the only one her so far from her “platoon”. She had yet to meet “Leroy Jethro Gibbs”. A discharged marine who supposedly had authority issues, or at least that was what Director Sheppard had said. Her brown hair fell into her blue eyes as she fidgeted in both impatience and anxiety. The door to the dining room swung open with a bang.
“Tony! Just drop it!”
“Well Kate…”
“Dinozzo! Shut up.”
“Sorry Boss.” Gibbs glared at Tony. He wasn’t very happy about being there in the first place, but Jen had just informed him not only would he be teaching a field training class, a history of the marines, and would HAVE to do a speech; but to put the cherry on this he was going to be in charge of 5 teenagers.
“Cheer up Gibbs, I’m sure these kids will be great!” Gibbs wished he could be as optimistic as Abby.
“So where are they at?”
“Well we could go find the director.” Gibbs gave Ziva her answer via death glare.
“Or we could just go to the table marked Gibbs.” She motioned over to a table in the corner with a lone girl sitting at it typing on a laptop.
“I thought I had 5 of the things.”
“They may be late boss.”
“Excellent observation Tony.” Gibbs swallowed hard. Something to him this would be the most life changing experience in his whole life. He walked over to the table and sat his coffee down.
“I thought there where supposed to be five of you.” Harley looked up at the man. This must have been him.
“They aren’t here yet sir….general…lieutenant….” Gibbs felt a small pang of warmth in his chest. A scowl relaxed into a kind smile. That was the same thing Abby had said when he first met her…well the end part was. For some reason she seemed to remind him of Abby.
“Just Gibbs. So I’m your…”
“Platoon leader is what the paper says si..Gibbs.” He smiled at the girl and took a seat.
“What’s your name?”
“I’m Harley Devane.”
“How old are you?”
“16.” That defiantly hit a mark in Gibbs heart. ‘Madison would have been 16…’ He thought to himself.
“I think the others are here now sir.” Gibbs looked around and saw four more teens headed in their direction. One girl and three guys. The girl had long dark auburn hair with strawberry highlights. One boy had jet black and board straight hair that went to his ears. The second had messy blonde hair, but at least it wasn’t long. The third had brown hair that was both poofy and long; the back was equal length with his chin. Gibbs shuddered these kids couldn’t have been more different. The girl introduced herself as Chelsea Darton, an all around athlete and apparent health nut. The first boy was Marcus “Marc” Lavery, from what Gibbs could tell he was the ‘outcast’ sort, the darker side of Goth or he might have just been ‘punk’. The second boy was Jason Emerald; he put off the ‘jock’ vibe. The third and final boy was Alex Hooper, he seemed to be the only ‘normal’ one…if Gibbs could past the hair. Actually Alex had an essence of McGee to him.
‘Oh joy.’ Gibbs thought. ‘An Angel, a devil, a sports fanatic, a computer geek, and a well whatever you could all a prep/jock. This is gonna be fun..”